Many of the to’s you used should be too’s. like too late for lunch and too early for
dinner, and …almost too gorgeous for…
Nice story, I hope these people are not freshmans in high school, yikes.

Nice mood. It should be “It didn’t matter, he hadn’t said which one. I knew he’d be at the one I went to.” Sorry to criticize, but it’s only to make it better. :)

He’s not in highschool and she’s in 11th grade. And thanks to both of you for correcting me!

I liked it!
ad you know I’m not much of a grammar corrector, because I don’t reall care.