Fascinating to see the directions everyone takes the same starter :) Great job!

I was just gonna say what Melia said. Everyone seems to like this one, and yet all of them are so dang different! Heck, that’s why I made the non-challenge.

the creatures giggled.. so did I reading it. LoA

Absolutely bazaar. I had the feeling that I was writing this story with you as I read, it was like you didn’t know what to make the characters do and I often feel that way when I’m writing or imagining a scene.

Now is that a good thing or a bad thing? Now it’s absolutely true of course. I just sat down and started writing with no plan in mind. But I’ve always considered bizzare as a compliment ^^

It’s a good thing. Originality is very important to me, and bazaar can fall in that category, at least it did concerning this ficlet of yours. Calvin and Hobbes was pretty bizarre too sometimes. lol wrong bazaar, bizarre I mean of course—I’m sure you didn’t think I meant your story was a strip of makeshift shops in the middle east.