hmmph. not sure i like it any better than the draft. feels rushed to me. eh. feedback?
rushed. hint intended.~wait! don’t read this yet, i’m editing!
pah. whtevr. it’s legal to read now. no editing done. feedback me.
It takes place over a long period of time, but it seems to flow nice. To me at least. Nice job.LoA
i agree with band baby
One Time, One Chance
One Time, One Chance
One Time, One Chance
.:band baby:.
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