Deep, beautiful, nearly brought a tear to my eye. “butterfly flutter by…” oh my.
I’d love to read more of your poetry if you ever choose to ficlet them.

I can imagine all of it and it makes me wish I was there, I sounds beautiful!

Bold choice to go with a poem on this one, and it works great for evoking both the place and calm state of being you experience there.
LoA

Beautiful. I especially love the bit about writing messages to your mother in the sand. That is amazingly poetic.
LoA

I think this is a great challenge for a poem, due to the five senses. And your poetry is wonderful! Such a relaxing place to be alone with your thoughts. I love that you wrote messages to your mother in the sand, a touching addition to your scene.

i like the imagry here. Good work

Lovely. Perfect. It really moved me. I adore your Ficlets.