Wow. You picked a killer photo. He looks like the Grim Reaper in burlap. And a great story to boot!

That really does fit the picture, and gives it some GREAT back story for someone else (or yourself) to work with.

Scary. It is a great back story, the “power”, the disfiguring, the name Betrayer ,and the Death Squads all are great places to build from.

wow.. that’s all I can say..This was..amazing.. can’t wait for a sequel!
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I like your Walter Icon. The description of the man in the picture was perfect.