ahhh. nooooo! i can’t read the second paraghraph. its REALLY enjoyable to read though…I like it…it makes me happy.

ok, it’s fixed…..and…..I love it….’nough said

awesome ending full circle i love it, love the sound effects really adds to the feel . can sense the dad pride. well written bravo. LoA

wow. this was good. I liked it.
LoA

Wow. That’s great! :D
-Lone Writer

This truly is a winner!