Awww!
Sweet and Sad at the same time.
You made a couple of spelling errors though. Not trying to be nit-picky or anything…
:D

good, but check your spelling on a few things, such as ‘threw.’ That’s used as in he threw the ball, in your context, you need to use ‘through’. Also you forgot the di in distance. My favorite way to check my stories is to copy and paste onto a Word document before publishing, it helps me alot. It might not catch things like threw, but it still helps when it comes to editing.
I love the way you captured the sad aspect of leaving highschool rather than looking towards college like most stories do.Good Job

haha, wasn’t trying to repeat lone writer, she hadn’t commented when I started writing my comment lol. But yes, I agree with everything she said, sweet and sad at the same time.

thanks for the help! Got it!