Ooh, that was a good one, a nicely described transition from one kind of love (caring concern) to another (passion!). And one can only imagine the possible fallout too! Or maybe I’m just pessimistic like that.
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Seamless. Absolutely nothing I could say to criticize at all. I just want more.
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That was weird. I meant to comment on another story… not that this wasn’t good, just not appropriate for the comment!

It was a seamless transition, though.

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I’m pretty much picturing Billy Crystal and Meg Ryan in this scene.

Billy Crystal and Meg Ryan? From When Harry met Sally? Was she a crier in that or something? I’ve never seen it.

Very nice. I agree with the above, except for BARomero because I’m not sure who those two are…
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This reminds me of how Nicholas Sparks writes. Yes, i have read a few of his books. Especially the electric touch part. very nice though =P

Man. Had to Google Nicholas Sparks. You’d think I lived under a rock or something :) I’m hoping it’s good thing that I remind you of that author.

That’s a high compliment considering you have never heard of Sparks. Enjoyable story with plenty of good original descriptions as usual.

Never seen When Harry Met Sally? Only the best RomCom ever!! Go rent it now!

I’ll stick it in my queue :)

Must agree with SoF….seamless.

electric touch…love that phrase.

very nicely written, great description.