Okay, I feel like a bit of a ponzer (and I don’t even know what that word means) doing a sequel to the featured ficlet, but it just spoke to me, and I had to do it. And, um, the devil made me do it?

Excellent Sequel your Grand Awesomeness. Dai is a really good character, he has a mysterious side.. Cool way to get read sequeling the featured ficlet.. lol.. Devil made you do it eh.
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Don’t know what a ponzer is.. unless you meant to put a A and you’re a German tank lol.
Maybe a ponzer is one who sequels featured ficlets.
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I liked it!
and I agree with Kermitgorf, I give him a mysterious side. You definitly put a different seuquel to it then what I would of thought it to be.

Excellent job with character development. Who knows where Dai will end up? Foreign Legion? South Pacific? Thailand? French Riviera? Can’t wait to see what he decides to do after reaching the coast.

Ouch.. sucks his mom came home.. Wonder how she’ll feel when he doesn’t come back. Or if he will actually leave.
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