Very nice. I like it. Good job =)
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In the first paragraph, you haqve ‘detizens.’ Nothing too hard to change, just thought I’d let you know.
LoA

The word “denizen” means an inhabitant or resident, so I’m referring to those living in NY.
Thanks for the comment. :)

Very nice! If that can’t be labeled “after my own heart” than I don’t know what can be. Hurray for music!

Aww, that’s great. I really like this piece.

the power of music … good job

When you mentioned the photos, I thought I would be seeing beauty, instead I find myself hearing beauty. It was a nice surprise, and you contrasted it with the woman’s ugly comments. At least she changed her tune.

nicccceeee, that was beautiful! hahaha! no pun intended

ok pun intended