ahah! That was really funny. Nice job!
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I didn’t know whether to laugh or cry at the end of the poem. A sign of it being a true masterpiece, to be sure. Seriously, though, this was funny as hell. Great job.

yeah, i didn’t know whether to laugh or cry… i opted for crying, but decided to laugh instead

idk bout the rest of you, but i threw my head back [nearly giving myself whiplash] and cracked up! this was awesome!

Omg, that was awesome!!!!!!!!!

Forced pseudo-meter in addition to rhyming! 1337.

That was fantastic. Absolutely wonderful job. I want to heap praise on it because I’m not big on poetry normally and the bunny and the bird made me feel appreciative of it for the first time in a long time. Well done.