creepy.. great job.. what happened that killed him?
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I agree, creepy. Nice job. I practically had shivers running through my spine! What happened to him though??
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Heck if I know what happened to him. I kind of hoped someone else would do a sequel so I could find out.

Thankyou for sequeling my ficlet. I’m honored that it inspired you to write! I’m going to sequel this and then your LOA challenge after I finish what I’m working on right now. You definately implemented the creeps into this story and me. There always seems to be many avenues to explore after you write, thoughts seem to emanate from your words.

I mean ideas not *thoughts

He seemed almost nonchalant – or maybe detached is a better word – about his dead condition, until the end. Great sequel.

Very nice. Excellent creepy imagery.