very good, thoughts of the doll, imaginative.
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Very descriptive; it sets a powerful mood. I love the first few opening sentences. the point of view is also unique.

I agree with Stovohobo that the POV is very unique. The story wouldn’t have been as good without it.
I also love the title, very creative. Coincidentally, I once wrote a ficlet with the same exact title, though it didn’t have anything to do with dolls. (If you’re curious: http://ficlets.com/stories/11724)
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yeah what they said :)
Beautifully written. I love the imagery of the sands blowing in, covering the floors with grime. It’s a visual of being forgotten.

Oh, I almost imagine those scenes from the nuclear test areas. Very great visual.

Effective personification of the doll to convey something I think a lot of people have felt at some time or another, the thought they have been left behind or perhaps that they won’t be ‘found’, whether that’s found professionally, interpersonally, or romantically. We can relate to the doll.
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