What happened to her sister?.. sequel please.
I can feel the lonliness of loss as she sits and watches the rain and ruminates upon her sister and her surroundings, wishing she were someplace else, haven’t we all had that feeling? I knowI have.
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It’s very well written. My only complaint is that the word “window” is used a lot here, particularly in the first paragraph. The ending leaves one wondering, as Kermitgorf writes, what happened to her sister “that horrible night.” I look forward to reading what happens next.
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