Very effective use of the present tense and first person—really felt like I was there with the person, having what sounds like a meditative moment of melancholy. Mmm, mighty nice.
LoA
(apparently today the A stands for alliteration)

Sorry to sound like an english teach her, but awesome use of sensory detail! You really made this alive. Great job.
LoA

*make that “here”. My bad.

I still love it, by the way.

What a moment of reflection and meditation, it made the place seem much bigger than the path to the mailbox. And it encompassed many seasons making it all the more a large mental moment.