Feels like a good ol’ classic horror film (not that I’ve ever been brave enough to see any), but the grammar issues take away from it. That’s just the nerd in me talking, but if it had punctuation, run-ons and whatnot corrected it would be even better.

Yeah, the spelling and grammar errors make it kind of irritating to read. I probably would have liked it better if there weren’t as many. I do like how it starts out with something as simple as noticing an odd light having been left on. Definitely creepy.