What a surprise ending. I can just picture the look on the seller’s face… definitely priceless ;)

Awesome story! I feel beyond sympathetic for the store owner, especially given Jaclyn’s lack of sensitivity. And I’ve met a few Jaclyn’s in my life (shudders).

she might have given it to her for free if it was for her daughter, now i hope grey lady charges her thru the nose hahah. great story.
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thanks everyone :)

Brutal, brutal, and awful. Great job sucking me in then kicking me in the cajones. I think the poor little old lady is going to have a stroke.
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And just to be clear, cause sometimes I’m vague, the story is good and the awful comment is a compliment, cause the story is effective with the shock value and stuff. It’s evocative, which is good. Shutting up now.

THX – no need for the freak out. I got the comment before I even read the disclaimer lol

and thank you – your comments mean a lot :) and im glad you liked it

wow, really didn’t see that coming! Nice job.
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Congrats on placing third in my challenge! This was a fun read. :-)
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