Oh, this is beautiful, and so sad. Nice use of the line “Daily, though, the tears do come” without being too repetitive. I pray this isn’t a true story…about the dad dying…

This is so beautful, yet so sad. I feel so sorry for you if this is a true story..
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rest assured, this isn’t a true story. idk. i just felt like writing something. i was inspired, hence the inspiration picture! get it? get it? ahahaha.=]

Wow, that was some really neat imagery. Very easy to imagine someone sitting there, eyes closed, pointing in her mind’s eye to where the various hurts have settled. Nicely done! Especially since it’s such a deep and creative jump from the inspiration picture.
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This is really nice; very deep.

I like the pattern of tears.
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