whoa. stellar. I liked the tetherball line even before the narrator points out that it’s random non-sense. I admire your voice. This practically read like an exerpt from a good novel whose published success has earned the writer alot of money.

*excerpt—yeah I couldn’t let it go.

There is a reason you’re the top of my favorite authors list… it;s the consistencey and quality of your stories, the action.humor/descriptions, dialogue are all amazing. The thoughts/narration in this, well you’re the best.
LoA