awww so sweet all the doggies and he spots the one, and the dog spots him.. fated.
LoA

That was cute, and an effective, consistent use of the first person present, always a challenge. Nicely done.
LoA

i liked it, but it felt a little choppy to me, and it seemed that a good number of sentences started with “Bennett” or “the dog”. but other than that, this is just down-right adorable!

I can almost see that doggy smile myself. Heartwarming!