Comments on 3. Journal Assignment (Stovohobo Challenge) by Storykeeper of Fae

THX 0477

Cute completion of the challenge, using the snippy teen voice to mock an assignment. Clever way to use all the words.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:20:14.
Stovohobo

Nice, I agree with THX ; nice use of mockery, but with a veil of romantic tones smothered like mushy glop on top. And “and my heart.” Awwwww…
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:20:14.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

Amusing, very amusing! I love reading stories written as journals, they are interesting and read faster for me. Way to use all 5 words!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:20:14.
flute faerie

This was cool man! Good job!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:20:14.
Geheim Sir Ayita

“cute” ? they have a minimum length for comments?! oh well i liked the story
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:20:14.
Amaster

If I really had to write an actual journal, that would be something like I would write. Good job.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:20:14.
Ridcully Calvert

I enjoyed this one – it seems to have been the most natural out of the 5 word essays that I have read. Good job!

LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:20:14.