NICE , my fave line “his hand found mine, one delicate finger tracing circles on the back of my hand, mapping routes between acquaintance and affection.” So romantic. Sigh.

Beautiful.

Like a great, flesh-colored beast /I giggled at the dancing shadow caused by the morning sun sneaking around his perpetually rocking foot< some really great lines in this story.
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yeh i agree…..very nice

Too cute. Well done!

Aww. Very sweet, a romantic twist. I love the bit about “His face awash in sunlight and the unmistakable glow of hope.” There’s something very clean, sweet, and refreshing about that, like lemonade on a scorching-hot day.

That was an amazing sequel! Hmm…I almost want to continue this.
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Ok, I went ahead and sequeled your amazing sequel to my sequel. Sorry. Had to say it. Too fun to pass up!
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Perfectly lovely.

I really like this.

Like a great, flesh-colored beast his hand seemed to be creeping through the narrow stretch of grass separating us.

I agree with kermitgorf, great lines in this overall great story.