i like how you introduced the new candies and how well you incorporated them into the story. You maintained the charm and the whimsical feel of the story. Well written!
Candid crime, or candied crime? These are really fun. It’s like the dream I had when I was little after playing Candyland for the first time. It also reminds me of Hershey Park.
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