interesting.. yeah man.. not forgetting the beer.. total necesity! his beer breath would kill him instantly!!

gasp a noise outside? I’m curious to know more…keep writing!
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Like, dude, this is so radical, man! Like, I could read this dude’s ficlets for a while, ya know what I’m sayin’, brah? Duuuuuuuudde…

Great back and forth between the two guys (who are perhaps not so bright) and the text. Candy bars are a definite priority. Very somber line at the end there.
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