This is a true story

hmm…a few mispelled words, a few grammatical mistakes. good idea

cute,one star though????
3 stars :]

I thought it was quite nice, almost like a little poem. And the parallel with the repeat of How could… and How dare… was a nice touch. Not sure why yoITSme only gave one star. Go figure.
LoA

Thnx guys… I edited it is it better now?

MY GOD ! ONE STAR ????
I luv it! It’s beautiful!

This is awesome!! One star?? That’s odd

lol… thnx guys…

wow…i really like it. it has a great poetic feel, with a great story behind it.

thank you that was what i was going for…

GOOD JOB !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good job court! i ♥ IT!

Is it about Tony??

yeah… it is!! me and hailey are the two girls…

ahaha im dumb. i was gunna ask that. oh wow. good job tho Court.

thnx!!

courtney i really do like this. and im so sorry for all of that! just like you said… all of this.. over a boy…

and him…. thats just… well you get it. lol

lol…. i know what ur saying…. iit’s okay… we were both making it worse by ignoring eachothers side of the stories…. then when we did listen… we never believed eachother… or we just lied to stop the drama… but now… we’re older and more mature…. so we can handle a fite… hopefully!! lol

i agree. last year we just yelled acusations blankly at eachother without knowing the whole story. and we let our friends take our sides without them knowing the whole story.

lol… i know… i felt so alone!!!

yah…. sorry again.

seriously… its ok… we’re good now… and we don’t really have anything to fite about… oh god i hope tony doesn’t come back… i still like him! [I know… I’m pathetic!] lol….

:/ lol…

well if he comes back sorry but…. well you get it. lol

wait …. i dont get it…. wha? note it to me…. lol