Comments on Jungle Bungle Cornucopia by THX 0477

THX 0477

Please read “The Rulesâ? before sequelling. http://ficlets.com/stories/21279
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:14.
zkid

Wow, a girl named Zoe winking at a girl named Zoe. Who would’ve thought that would ever happen?

I’m starting to like this story… :P
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:14.
Lone Writer

Wait…What?
I’m confused by zkid’s comment…
Anyway, don’t you think it might be just a little awkward for us people who aren’t men?
But 5 stars anyway….
;D
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:14.
THX 0477

Okay, I went back and checked. I don’t know what zkid is thinking, but the original bit clearly has ‘you’ as the protagonist with two friends Zoe and Joe, the protagonist ‘you’ never being named. Lone Writer on the other hand, has a valid point, although the books were always at least illustrated gender specific, so there’s a little bit of suspension of your own reality involved. Then again, I spent four years outside San Francisco, so, you know, roll with it.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:14.
zkid

What I’m saying is I’m a girl named Zoe, so when I read this story, that’s what’s happening.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:15.
THX 0477

Oh, I get it. Writing in second person has some unexpected perils. So I shouldn’t have gone for romance, huh? Ah well, it’s still flattering even if you’re not into it, right.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:15.
Lone Writer

Ohhhh! Ok now I get it!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:15.
.:band baby:.

haha, I guess the you is ok for any guy reading this. But so what? I think I’ll sequel this anyways. I can pretend I’m a guy at least.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:24:15.