This wont do
I dont want to
Feel unglued

There is a lot of energy in this poem, especially in the pace with the rhymes coming back to back. I really liked the lines above.

wow.. awesome poem..it’s like a song.. very emotional.
LoA

wow, very emotional. Very nice. I can really relate to this line:
I cant cry, I dont know why
Im afraid to try

I agree with the above. Very emotional, and very nice!
LoA