Good starter, I like this. Alot! Keep going!
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Way to use the eclipse to inspire your little love story! I like the flashback, but want to know about this night, too!
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Very impressive. The lunar eclipse was definitely a sight to see!. I like this story and I’m excited to read more

I like this a lots!

nice starter, really compells (i think thts the word i want…) the reader=]

“you know the type of bad mood where you realize your boyfriend is cheating on you with your best friend. She wasn’t having the greatest day… espically since her best friend was a guy.” I love that part. It really helps you to feel sorry for Ashley. I can’t wait to read the rest of this series.