I read it twice. I was a little confused at first. (I think.) But then I got it. Cute. The first time I read it as if it were one person. After I figured out it’s two, I like it. ;)

awesome dialogue.. great internal narration.
LoA

Yeah, it was an experiment. I don’t think I pulled it off as well as I could have, but, hey, it was a first attempt. :)