Some really fun ideas in here, especially the clash between two mythologies. It winds up a little rushed, and jumbled though. Nothing wrong with taking a bit more time to describe what’s going on. And just a thought (totally my opinion here), it might work better to explain that she’s a daughter of Poseiden before she does the trick with the water. I think it would eliminate a little of the ‘Huh?’ factor.
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Very action packed!

My recommendation would be to add a bit of paragraph structure. I can’t wait to see what happens in prequels/sequels!