I really really like the train of thought feel to this. ~Which is how my mind runs from the time I wake in the morning until my off switch flips at night. ;)

I agree with Jenunique, I love the loose feel to the train of thought here; this is very very sweet. It makes me smile! It’s a touching way to portray a conversation. I adore it.

I agree too. Is that what boys say when they like you? “I like your earrings.” ? Cause I know one thats said it to me about 1000 times.
….About the same pair of earrings…..

lol lone writer! lol!
I have gotten I like your hair but never earings…
it is very cute and I like the what did I just agree? part

I like the thought format too. I also love the comparison between walking the hallway rejected and alone versus elated and not like a loser!

Lol Lone Writer! I had a guy say that to me once… but I had just met him and I was wearing an _awesome- pair of earrings. =)
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i like the train of thought writing. I also like the part when she thinks ‘what have I just agreed to?’ Very nice!
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Wow, so many comments. I am so jealous. But it was a really cute story in a very effective ‘anxious teenage guy stream of consciousness style’. My palms got sweaty just reading it! Ah, the memories.

This was really cute!! Lol, I’ve never had the earrings bfor, but i have had like ur shirt.

aww sweet story.. by the looks of it, someday it might be a featured one.. lots of feedback.. Go Jake!!

Really neat way to tell a story, I concur with all of the above praise. This is incredibly relatable!

Congrats on getting it featured! =D

Woo hoo, Kermit, congrats mucho on Featured!!!

Congrats on being featured, Scotty! :-)

Yay congrats!!

Yeah congrats

Congratulations!!! party music plays awesome ficlet!
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VERY NICE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is really cool, congratulations on being featured….!this story is really good…congrats!