woo! first comment! yea so i helped correct this…i feel so special lol. it’s really good so far babe, this and Quiet. i really like it so far so keep writing!!! please =]

I like this, another duel series! This really is a unique series and one of Never Explains many series.

thnxs guys that means mucho 2 me!!!

cool, i can really work with this!!

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interesante sequell….i will have to continue reading….
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I like the potential in this. And how she’s ready to stand up for Tyler already.
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a veiw from another kid.. i sense a friendship developing.

I wish more people in the real world were like this. Ready to stand up to anyone that deserved it at anytime.

i love how you switched the POV . i can’t wait to learn more about this character. a low grade public school? why did she have to move from a house to an apartment? interesting. this sets the stage well for an exciting story. i love how she would stand up for the boy who is blind!