wow. i love this. it is amazing. good job.

I love this. You told it like it is, with such beautiful literary skill. Keep writing, it helps you get in touch with your soul and your true feelings.

Quite lovely. I think it’s a great counterpoint to mine where I was trying to say, “I’m flawed; don’t love me.” You turned the same doubts and fears of inadequacy into, “I’m flawed; love me and help me be that hero.” So much nicer your way.

wow! nice! once again true love!

i really like this. he is questioning himself and wondering who he is, it is really good.

There was a note of hope ringing throughout this. Beautiful and subtle.
LoA

Excellent work, Kermitgorf… Love your writing. The image of a knight in flannel armor is fitting for the context as well – quite excellent. – Yoda

Excellent, it flows like a poem. So honest, transparent, skillful.