I guess leaving, or trying to, would hurt them in court.. I think. Nice series though!LoA
Gritty and methodical. Nice job building suspense and getting in some glimpses into the character’s personality.LoA
descreptive stake .. i do not like him.. means u wrote him well. i lkie how the focus changes back and forth differnet perspectives.
i like the way when you change perspective you change the narrative its tight
.:band baby:.
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