ahhh he is a brother! this is really sad and good!

This was sweet and very real. Amazing how you can come with some really out there stuff and then totally nail the real life pain and emotion in a piece like this.
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raw emotion.. filled with anguish. it touched me. you’re an amazing writer.
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Vivid detail. I could see the story unfold right before my eyes.. You really know how to bring your characters to life The interaction with the father and son was very life like and real. Sequel you must.

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Wow, amazing. Such emotion, such detail. Excellent writing.
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Very good, awesome emotion and detail. I love it. Greatly written too!
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