I like it! Very sad, but has remorse too.

Ouch. Very harsh, but with a truth to it that can’t be denied. Well done.

Aww… this really made me think, since I’m an aithiest as well…. :\
Very nicley written though! four stars!

Cool, thanks!

Everyone wonders that some time or another. It makes you wonder even more: why do we want to hope so badly, what makes us want to live out fully, if all we ever do is die in the end? Humans’ design can’t deal with death, and our body should be able to regenerate forever, but our cells start deteriorating because of a sickness called ‘old age’ that we were never meant to catch

Wow, really good. You brought a complexity to the character, conflicting emotions, real and intense. Very well done.