Very funny, classic older married couple sort of interaction. I couldn’t tell at first if ‘the pigs’ referred to actual pigs or just a couple the husband didn’t think highly of. Nice job getting that across with some subtlety. You write some great stuff and are a great addition to ficlets! LoA
Thanks THX ! If you check out the URL at bottom you’ll see that the pigs are indeed… pigs ;) But then it could certainly be interpreted otherwise. maybe someone will write a sequel and take it off in a completely different direction.
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