Okay, I may have strayed into telenovella land again, but a sequel is up. I love both your and Nouvelle’s shots here of real, raw, human emotion into the story, which is kind of a neat ebb and flow. Earlier we got to see Renard’s inner workings while everyone else ran around, and now he’s more in the action while the others become introspective. It’s almost like we planned it or something! Awesome.
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What I like a lot about this series is that everything flows together, all the stories come naturally to the reader even though we’ve got three people writing them. Like THX said, almost like you planned it. Magnificent.
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yeah, you’re right thx. and this was marvellous, it really meshed well with marguerite’s. they’re really on the same level here. i really love how he keeps thinking about death, its beautiful