this is just.. ok Im speechless LOL .

The title kind of made me click…in a weird, twisted sort of way. Hm. I will say that you did use the picture to a certain advantage. \=)

Looking at the picture again, sorta looks like J-Lo gettin’ her Iron Giant on…. Have to admit it was a pretty “out there” ficlet. : )

Yeah, ‘out there’ is one way to describe it. Sort of like an experiment with putting three very ‘off’ characters into an uncomfortable situation and letting chaos ensue.
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“Experiment” is the operative word… : ) Honestly, I ran across the picture (which I thought was quite good) & had to write something about it! Still think it looks like J-Lo getting’ her Iron Giant on – better than the J-Lo / South Park scene though eh?

I loved it! The robot’s name is one of my favourite Clash songs (tho apparently its also the name of a porn star. Google knows everything.)
I thought where you went with the story was unexpected and cool. Didn’t see Tara killing Josie coming at all. Very cool story.
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WOW WOW WOW WOW JUST WOW

Twisted homage to J-Lo. Not quite sure what to do with it. Definitely held my interest. Yeah, wow is a good word.