I had to read it a few times to get it. Try making individual lines from the quotations so it’s easier to read.

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yeah, NE has a good suggestion. But still I like how she cleans everything even though Tyler’s blind.
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i also love how she cleaned the whole house even if Tyler wouldn’t be able to tell if it was clean or not.

haha i agree with Flute & Band Baby, thats funny. great job.
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i would have done seperate lines, though i didn’t have enough characters left. srry

loved the last line. yeah, maybe her dad shouldn’t know about how they were making out under the stars. lol. great writing. she truly cares about him. that is so sweet.