Nice.

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ehh keep going!! i need to know what happens!!!

weird… can’t wait for the sequel!
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Oh, so it is two different people’s lives! I got it! cool! SEQUELLLL !! DO IT !…. ahem, I mean sequel please.

this is awesome goood.

Definitely can feel how off balance and off center the character feels.
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Love the name Jolinda – the characters’ interaction / dialogue flow naturally. Keep it going. Nicely done, Kermitgorf!

sequelled!!