This sorta has a Harry Potter feel to it.. I dont know what makes me think of it but it does.

i was thinking about the exact opposite sort if story this turned out to be. its really good.

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That is cool! I don’t feel so sorry for her because she has something in her life to accomplish. Something good and she has been blessed with powers, not a normal person. She also has a version of a mom.

I love that the stew “could’ve been dishwater.” Nice touch.
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I agree with Storykeeper. And nice story. I wasn’t really expecting the whole, “we need to help them” bit, but it was a nice touch. Could deffinatly lead to a sequel.
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hmm. interesting…
sequel?
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Nice take on the challenge character, giving her both an ally and a purpose.
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this should be sequeled