Awesome. I love the explosiveness of the question, and the what do I do now? factor after the affirmative answer.

This is cute and very believable. I liked it.
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=D
that just added a grin to my face too
I could sense her nervousness
then how happy she was
Awesome job!
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this was way too cute..i loved the whole scene..like the nervousness and the “I’d never have guessed I’d make it this far”…it’s all great.
love it

when did girls get bold enough to ask guys out?? great dialogue.
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So cute. Nice telling of a magical moment, whether your 12, 18, 23, or 67. It’s just nice to put yourself out there and find out someone likes you a little bit too. And girls asking guys out: totally awesome. That’s how I got most of my girlfriends in high school, and thank goodness cause I rarely had the cajones to ask them out. (was a loooooooooooser)
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awww that is sooo cute… and amazingly realistic love it!