Very nice! Now, the question is: was the man he just shot an accident, or were the ravens trying to tell him that this was coming? I’m thinking it’s the latter.

Ooh…nice…sharp ending!

Hmm…very intriguing. Obviously, it’s very hard to read a piece of literature about Ravens without thinking of Poe, but this was a great deviation from that mindset. Very nice surprise ending, too. Are the ravens psychologically affecting him? May the answer come…if I sequel. =)

I hope my sequel did your story justice.

Wow…

Not much to say but that!

LoA