“Drop your ludicrous weapon or the bank manager gets it.”
I love that line. I think I’d like to see more of Edmund. Does he have a full slated of non-lethal Bond-ian weaponry? Must know more!

like the story. Entertaining. Almost James bond-ish. Very cool.. Definately have to keep this up. I agree with Capital W that was a good line.

It’s like an over zealous bank employee with a knack for gadgetry. Reads like a daydream of an otherwise mild-mannered bank teller.
LoA

“Drop your ludicrous weapon or the bank manager gets it.â€?

I love this line, too. and why don’t more police officers have neck remotes? That makes so much sense! :)

Oh, thanks THX . You gave me an idea.

Love it, love it, love it. Hilarious. And I love how he sends the smoke grenade through the drive-thru.

I didn’t see this until just now, because of the sequel you wrote yesterday! Reminds me of the Transporter. Ridiculously over the top and very, very cool.