My mother swears that one night she was able to see people’s auras. I swear she must have been drunk, but I wasn’t born yet when it happened and not there to witness it, so who knows?
This story reminded me of that.
It’s really well written. It’s also begging for a sequel. I want to know what she saw!
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I do too. Great vivid descriptions and it left me begging for more.

Thanks, guys. This was a desperate attempt on my part to break a bout of writer’s block.

Oh wow, what did she see!? Kind of reminds me of one of my friends who talks about people and their auras…she can be a little strange sometimes too. Awesome ficlet, I hope there’s a sequel!
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Great job on this. I am curious too about what she saw. It just seems to be the way you wrote it; making us all want more. Outstanding job!
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Hmm. I wonder why she cried. What could she have seen in the narrator’s aura that was so unsettling, endearing, or saddening to provoke a tear? I wish I could come up with something!
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O, wow, that was fabulous, THX ! In a way, I want to know what exactly she saw, but in another way, I think the story is perfect as it is. I’m not certain if I want to see a sequel or not! :D
Fabulous job, as I have come to expect from you.
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Yay, it’s a featured Ficlet! Congrats, you deserve it!

Very nicely done, Sir THX … I’ve always admired your writing, and this is very well done indeed. Very interesting & could go many possible directions. Bravo!

I completly agree with all the above. Wonderful and grats on the featured ficlet!
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Congrats on being featured! This deserves it. :)

I still can’t help laughing at “see what the crazy ol’ lady says about your areola”. Pure genius!
And, yes, congrats on the feature.
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This is really good! It must of been pretty bad for her to cry like that. Congrats on being featured!
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amazing as usual
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love it. i see auras but only at times. i have to concentrate.

Hmm, interesting.

Love it. Just the sort of thing I like in a really short story. It says “This is all there is, but it’s enough”, and it is. First time I’ve felt compelled to comment on a story on the front page of ficlets, you have my admiration.

Congrats on Features Ficlet Sir THX , and I’m glad your writer’s block is over, one of your best Characters so far.
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Happy event you got featured, congrats!
(Late comment.)