One of the better Ficlets I’ve read so far! Great descriptions of the shockwaves, you can almost picture them hitting the protagonist’s body.
Tragedy! Well done with the action leading to oblivion that winds up being welcome in comparison to the pain.LoA
WOW NICE DESCRIPSTION 5 /5 BRILTANT
wow! PAIN PAIN PAIN ! Don’t die!LoA
hmm… it couldnt hurt thaaat bad… XD
atllta
THX 0477
DARK!
Blusparrow
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