Cute, I like his determination and resolve. The dialog or interaction got a bit rushed at the end (that darn character limit).
LoA

“There’s more, I wanted to ask you out on a date. I was very nervous and my mouth couldn’t produce the words to make me cool enough to have a chance with you. What I wanted to say was you seem very nice, your smile is the very best, and I like the way you style your hair.â€?
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I love that paragraph. The words that everyone thinks when they’re in this situation but usually don’t say just like that.

aw, he’s sweet. I would go on a date with him. if I was a little older…
Anyways, I like this series, I just read the whole thing. great job, very unique
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Yay, score one for the geeky guy.

This kinda reminds me of Seinfeld for some reason =P Great story!

lol! cute cute.
i like how he complimented her.

yay! geeky guy!!!=)