I like this.

fool thing’s not letting me rate. four stars.

Nice job setting up the tone with the song lyrics and then a great back and forth between the two friends.

A good setup. Everyone’s got that one hot friend (unless, of course, you’re the hot friend, in which case I guess you could say the opposite).

yeah, I know how Matt feels. Not that it’s happened to me twelve times.. but yeah. Nice start here. =)

Nice setup for the song into the story. Sound like they’re at a party.

ooh…I like this…