NO! Hehe. I like it. Four stars.
LoA

talk to her! you know you want too!
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nice,can you read some of my poems and tell me what u think please

nice,can you read some of my poems and tell me what u think please

oh, this could go badly haha. but he really should talk to her!
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I see a metaphoric train wreck in the near future for this man. That’s al I’m saying.

i been waitin all day here for ya babe, so why don’t you come sit and talk to meee.. tell me how we’re gonna be together always.. hope you know that when it’s late at night, i hold on to my pillow tight, and think of how you promised me forevvverrrrrr=]
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i love that song! jojo rocks, she needs to come out with something new!

i been waitin all day here for ya babe, so why don’t you come sit and talk to meee.. tell me how we’re gonna be together always.. hope you know that when it’s late at night, i hold on to my pillow tight, and think of how you promised me forevvverrrrrr=]
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i love that song! jojo rocks, she needs to come out with something new!

wonderful dialog.

and a lovely sequel…
LoA

oh, and I agree with Kermit, the dialogue’s ace =]

yepp. nice dialog. I’m liking this so far….I see so many possibilities…
LoA